Interesting topic. I was actually thinking abt the same issue the other day, abt how silly and full of junk TV is. The one channel that I actually do like checking out is the History channel I guess TV is a satanic tool, wasting our time and diverting our attention away from what is truly important.

Btw, a way to improve what you write is perhaps to tie your posts to a wider picture, because then they become more interesting. Rather than limiting it to the fact that many people spew nonsense. What I mean is that rather than describing a lot, but having one or two points you could perhaps analyse the situation, give more points/views or opinions

A lot of description is all very well and artistic, but one or two points that will only hold the attention of a limited number of people. To actually hold the interest of a wider audience you need to give more points, arguments, etc and tie it in to a bigger picture. Plus, I think that the choice of topics could be improved. The last topic for instance was a waste of space and was ‘junk’, showing the reader that the author is average minded focusing on the insignificant. I think that you should be much more courageous to venture out into topics that are truly of concern to people, that people do feel strongly about, being of significance. For instance, the topic on astrology was too long for a simple point. Plus, the topic itself would not hold the interest of many. We know that there are stupid and shallow people out there who will choose people according to the signs. It isn’t an exciting topic to read about.

I think you are too cautious with the topics you write about, that in some ways they become uninteresting, mediocre and too average. For instance, I personally would not have bothered reading the astrology post. Plus, writing a poem on why you write using pencils, you could have probably invested that time instead on a topic that was more powerful, that would really catch the attention of people and make them respond to it. To clarfiy, I really don’t care why you write using a pencil, coz a lot of us do use pencils. Another topic is “ACHAAR NOT H.R”. To me it just sounded like an arrogant rant, mocking others, that puts you in a bad light. Why should I bother reading it? I think that if you choose topics that are much more interesting, intelligent and are really affecting people powerfully in the present then there would be more responses.

This is only my opinion. I have always encouraged you to write and not give up, since I believe in that you have the potential to do something wonderful. But I think that your writing should not be limited to simple ideas that do not have substance. You are intelligent and I believe that you can be innovative, refreshing and interesting in the ideas that you involve, rather than just your beautiful description. It really depends on you though, whether you are happy with your situation on having a blog/diary type of thing where you talk about the daily events of life or want to extend and reach out to a wider audience. Good luck!

اضف الى ذلك
من يأتي الى المقابلة و المفروض يكون متحضر لها
و لكن حديثه يكون على هذه الشاكلة المفجعة
امممممممممم في الواقع اممممممممم حقيقتن امممممممممممممممم احم احم امممممممممممممممم
و دخل بين الجملة الغير مفيدة اعلاه كلمتا طبعا و لان و بجذي يكون عندنا رد كامل بس غير واف لسؤال
استغرب حقيقةً أن تظهر شخصيات تتحدث بهذه الطريقة المضحكة المبكية و هي تنتمي الى شعوب عربية تهيم عشقا بالحديث و التحدث و استخدام الالفاظ و اللعب بها
و هي تنتمي الى العرب الذي انزل لهم القرآن كمعجزة
شكرا لك يا رائد على البوست

نحن في زمن كثرت فيها القنوات الفضائيه واصبحت البرامج بمختلفها مواد تطرح فقط ولا اهميه لنوع البرنامج او الشخصيه المستضافه(راقصه-مغنيه-رجل اعمال-سياسي…….)وبغض النظر عن لباقته او سخافته الاهم من هذا كله ان يعرض البرنامج وتستمر القناة… هههههههههههه اخس ياااااااارجل حتى نباح الكلاب احسن من كلامك.

عندما تفخر القنوات بلقاء مع فيفي عبده .. ماذا ننتظر من تلك القناة أن تضيف إلى مداركنا غير الزخام (كلما مثل الجوكر يمكن أن تستعملها على كيفك)؟

NI, although I agree that the last post might not have “added” anything to our knowlege or did not make us think .. but I dont think this blog should only be about that .. mixture is very imporant .. when you open a magazine about poetry .. would you like it to be just dry poetry or you would appreciate if the editor managed to bring some humor to the magaizne that could be realted to poetry?J
I think its was an intellegent spotting .. and its something I always admire about others when they see something and they manage to take a pic and make a joke about it .. anyway .. thats my thought about the last topic as I didnt think it was “junk” the same goes to the other posts you mentioned ..

AP, I knew that you’d come here and say something abt my post! LOL

AP, like I said it depends on what he wants to write. The majority of blog owners just write abt their daily events as a diary. If Raed wants to be like everyone else, then he is successful. If he wants to be distinct, then he needs to stand out with the topics he comes up with. He has a beautiful way of expressing himself, but I think that he has a lot more potential that what he writes here. He can deal with better thought-provoking and truly moving material, but only if he has the courage to write it from the depths of his soul. But maybe then it is just because I have very high expectations.

NI, (I did contemplate putting my opinion because I thought you would say that .. but I just cant get the argumentitive devil out of myself :p )

I know he has lots of potential dear .. but I beleive (being someone who writes too) that you need to get everything out of your system .. good bad .. in the middle .. and slowly it will get cleared to the exlence we are looking for ..

Take me for example, when I felt what I wrote was “junk” .. I stopped .. but I think thats the worst thing I did because its taking me so long to get into the habit again!

Its my opinion anyway .. Raed is free to take the route that makes him more comfortable.

AP, you’re kind. God bless your beautiful soul.

Oh well, now I wish I didn’t bother myself writing my opinion, there’s no point really, I should have just kept my mouth shut. Anyway I’m off! Forgive me Raed if you felt offended, I only meant it for the best.

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