raed r u jew?? cause u sure act like one!!!!!!!
the story is so interesting please no more sequel thing i really really neeeeeeeeeeeeed to finish it.. and by the way what happened to “رواية بعنوان لا ادري”؟
did u had the time to finish it?? ابي اعرف شصار مع ماجد&سلوى تزوجوا ولا ماتت سلوى؟
if u did finish it do post it and u should publish it cause if u didnt 7raaaam it would be a waste of ur talent..

Dear whatever,

check the time of the post, yup missy you’ve got it right! this post is becoming an inferno that I have made for myself.. it is taking lots of time, lots of effort, and I am monitoring the statistics (yes people the big brother sees you all ) which suggests that the ratings are dropping .. so

I am not sure if I should stop and cut it loose like many other threads I had in mind. Maybe just to annoy those who follow the story *, which is true by the way I have actually spoken to Satu San couple of days ago, i am gonna like switch to other posts before i get back to this one.. but all in all keep tuned. it keeps getting better.

as for the other titled (la adry) it never skipped my mind, I do want to publish it but lets say that the most honest opinion i ever got back was one that belonged to a shy reader who simply was like :

شتخربط أنت ؟

so I am waiting for my thoughts to be clear on this, though I already know the ending and how to go about it .. am just too lazy

thanks for the kind words keep visiting keep getting addicted.

ازدادت الاحداث تشويقا
هل لنا بالجزء الاخير يا رائد
؟؟!!

تبين الصج أخت بحرينيه العم رائد شكله بيذل أبونا عشان يكمل القصة.. بس مو مشكله خذ وقتك يا باش مهندس على القصص واعطنا من ما انعم الله عليك من ثمار الكتابه بس تكفى مو تطول عشان حبل الأفكار ماينقطع..

و الله العظيم العملية متعبة يا بحرينية و whatever ليت الأمر بالسهولة .. لكن عدد القراء في تناقص و علي التدارك ..

كما تقول بحرينية .. الأحداث أصبحت مشوقة ..

بس عندي إقتراح صغيرون .. ممكن لما يكون في حوار بين أكثر من شخصين تبين من المتكلم في كل سطر؟ لإني مرات أضيع في الأشخاص ..

مشكووووور وما تقصر

امممممم

انا مره ضايعه

ماني فاهمه شي ….يعني فاهمه بس مو ميه بالميه …

يمكن عشان الاسماء يابانيه ما تثبت في مخي زي العربيه ….

بس احس الكتاب المشهورين هما اللي ما نفهم ايش يقولو ميه بالميه هههههههههه (هبل)… (;

what ever
Arabian Princess
يا حلاوة يا ولاد هناك من يوافقني الرأي
نعلم بأن العملية متعبة و بأن الامر ليس بهذه السهولة
و لكننا نعلم ايضا اننا نريد معرفة التتمة
احسبها بقى بطريقتك :p

sounds to me that you are not of the kind who accepts criticism so im afraid to tell you feedback, after all i am the average reader you are targeting, and i like your writing style, but -here it goes- last posts are not as the first ones, better to concentrate on the quality not qty. i don;t know what has changed but your records are showing that decrement, there might be some reason and you the one who can find it precisely. I hope to read some good stuff soon, with regards

btw, japanese names are confusing draw some chart engineer raed

that was me above

Okay, here goes آمنة

the very fact that I kept the shoutbox, rating system and have removed email requirement to comment shows how welcoming I am to my reader’s feedback be that agreeing or disagreeing with that which I have to offer their minds.

I can’t say that the fact that you find my older posts richer in context and have more quality not troubling a bit, but I always take that as a challenge as great writers have always been criticized for some of their works

good stuff shall be written Inshulla.. though I never received a comment about the identity post.. so tell me what you think ? honestly o 3adi!

thank you for the feedback very much appreciated

as for the names : there are only four names in this story no more ! Mr. Satu *the father , Kuramata * the older brother , and Yamada the protagonist the mother remains anonymous all throughout so..

nonamajnoona

حشيش بعيد عنك … قولي يا لطيف بس!

AP

إن شاء الله و على راسي الإقتراح و راعية الإقتراح

what identity post?

بحثا عن الهوية يا آمنة

أي بحث عن الهوية؟

لول أوكي بدوِّر